Green Monkey

I'm scared!!! I WANT MY MOMMY!!!!!!!!

thats a really unique poem. I like all the ways u use "your eyes" and then write stuff.

I thought the poem was very creative, but like what "forest_ofthe_nightingale " said, the ending was off.

"ice cream dribbles down her chin and on to her new dress " haha thats kind of funny! I like your poem a lot!

Nice work! Believe it or not, that poem actually cheered me up. .... pinata.... lol

Very interesting story. But from the sounds of it, this sort of story has been done before. No offense, but I'm nit-picky about originality...

wow. thats a very good poem. I like it a lot. The last 2 lines are the best

Although I really like your poem, I dont think worser is a word......

Man, a poem like that really gets me worried..... That's pretty sad. Sounds um... bad... Though your poem is sad it is also very well written.......

I really liked the poem though I do not know what segue means.... But I really did enjoy the last four lines. "would i still be here writing poems about ...

hmm... i guess your right... i probably should put my main points. "home"... but thanks a bunch for the comments! :):):):):):):):):):):):):)

to answer, Superman CANT outrun the flash. But when superman learns to fly, the flash says hes cheating! lol . Anyway, i think you have too many parts where the ...

though i can see it should be in the 'other poetry' forum, it also has a distant sense of being dramatic poetry. But i di think it was really cool ...

"I am popular now, more popular than I have ever been. I just want someone to cuddle me and kiss me, " -okaaaaaayy, a little strange but thats alright...

whatever thats supposed to mean...